Sunday, July 22, 2007

not your typical rebellYAWN






That which is lying
deep within
is crying out
to be free from sin


God's Image inside
has been reborn;
from Death your soul
is completely torn


The Real Revolution
is in what we do;
Rebel against what's
killing you

4 comments:

Bringer of Smiles said...

i like the idea of commenting on my own blogs instead of adding more in the text and detracting from my focus. so here we are.

i would like to give credit to rhiannon and jimmy for letting me (without permission) steal, verbatim, lines they've both come up with to completely create my last stanza. ah yeah. (wish you copyrighted it now, don'cha?!).

i also tried something new with the html. figured i might fancy it up a bit with a border. i know i'm cool. tell me what you think.

Chris Whitler said...

Fancy...woooooo! Oh, the poems nice too. Thanks for the ride and the talkin'. Let me know how the week's going.

Anonymous said...

John, I love you... but...it's... "Rebel AGAINST what is killing you". If you're going to quote one your best friends, GET IT RIGHT!!! Or get left.
As Chris says all the time, "Shooby-doo-bop-bee-bop-'n' doodah."
Or Aaron ALWAYS says, "I really Catholics and animals and peasants... and...my mother."

Anonymous said...

to quote myself correctly, it's actually, "I really HATE Catholics and animals and peasants and my mother."